MissionFailure's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[ENA 3.1 NGR - Day 12]

Top tier MS paint ref

[Clubbin]

Really enjoying the flow/movement of your work! The emotional projection is great and your anatomy is on point without feeling stiff or clunky.

If I had to critique one thing on this, it would be the desire for a more developed/defined background with more contrast and a better definition on the floor to guide the eye.

Ehmbe responds:

Woah thank you so much for the critique!Yes i need to work on backgrounds alot more.Its a huge hole in my stuff.

[18 - Pompadour Fella]

I really enjoy this work!

The expression and details used on the face contrasts well with the cartoony swirl on the pomp. Keeping the BG simple also doesn't pull the eye away from the focus point.

If I could offer some critique, the left shoulder seems a bit low but that could be due to the illusion created from the overly thick collar.

Great work! I look forward to seeing more~

[Listen]

UNF!

Now that is some sexy work there! the hard light and covered eyes... this has a lot of emotion and speaking value. Can't wait to see more from you!

[OotG Wartimes]

I love

the coloring on the characters themselves... Yet the body positions and anatomy seems terrible awkward... I think if you focus on that for a while and practice, you'll get more of the result you are looking for. You have so much potential I really do hope to see more from you!

[Cut in to pieces]

I like

this style! It's a very nice change of pace from your usual work. I have to ask if it was perhaps inspired from playing madworld?

Laufman responds:

This piece was inspired by Frank Miller. I really like to experiment with different styles. Keeps me on my toes:)

[Hinode Plays X-box]

hmmm

The lineart needs a lot of love.... but this is a nice picture all around other wise...

Didn't we ever get through those silly console wars yet?

Kosuk responds:

haha the war is never gonna end until someone wins! (i think)
yeh x D well I actually wanted the scetchy style! thanks for ur nice review!

[Consumed]

Wow!

That's rather amazing! The handcuffs could use some more love... and the hair seems almost Bayonetta like. Keep it up!

zigan responds:

Always a pleasure to hear good thoughts coming from you! I check on your newest works when I'm on here as well. Bayonetta did infact cross my mind when I started working on the hair, but it was not deliberate. ^_^; I was going to look up some refrences for handcuffs to edge up on more detail, however, I also wanted to get this piece done a bit quicker. Thanks for the 10! :)

[Dino Steed]

Can't stop...

Loling so hard right now! It's like a gigantic nostalgia bomb since it reminds me of that dino cereal they used to sell in the 90's, they were dinomite or something like that... Thank you!

RubberNinja responds:

Haha, glad you like it :)

[Iron Fist]

oddly enough.

the fact you left in the edges of the picture make it more appealing.

Zombie-clock-monkey responds:

Yeah, I was gonna cut them out, but decided not to at the last minute.